Logical Obscurity

I miss you

Posted in The Wife by masood on November 3, 2008

I miss you; when I wake up every morning,
As much as I do even when I am snoring.

I miss you; when I get ready for work,
Not finding my stuff feels like a dork.

I miss you; when I unpack my lunch,
Not making me feel even to munch.

I miss you; want your voice on the phone,
But all I get now is a stupid dial-tone.

I miss you; when I get back home,
Only waiting is my bed’s foam.

I miss you; your side is empty,
Sleeping now feels like humpty-dumpty.

I miss you; my wife, my friend,
Comon, bring this distance to an end.

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  1. Iya said, on November 4, 2008 at 7:35 am

    ooohhhh…. that is so sweetly sad..when are u travelling to India?? be with her dude…these days wont come back again..

  2. Masood said, on November 4, 2008 at 8:28 am

    She’s back on the 17th. Gone for a little over 2 weeks. But yes, these days won’t come back. So waiting eagerly for her to return!

  3. Rohina said, on November 4, 2008 at 2:49 pm

    oh. my. god.
    thts like the thing i feel these days..as if u just spoke my feelings.
    damn. i miss my hubby too. :(

  4. Masood said, on November 4, 2008 at 2:51 pm

    That came to my mind while writing it down. I knew you’d instantly co-relate!

  5. mindspace said, on November 5, 2008 at 10:01 am

    :( gosh! I am not the only one…
    Need i say more?

  6. Masood said, on November 5, 2008 at 9:14 pm

    I hear you! It’s in the air.

  7. Puja said, on December 29, 2008 at 2:11 pm

    Thats really sweet….but God! Seems like all of you guys are sailing in the same boat :D

  8. Indian Homemaker said, on May 27, 2009 at 7:25 am

    I now formally declare you a JKG

  9. [...] Masood can compete with my favorite JKG – Shahrukh Khan… !! Need proof read ‘I miss you’! [...]

  10. Indian Homemaker said, on May 27, 2009 at 7:30 am

    There’s something for you on my blog! I will be honored if you accept it please!

    • masood said, on June 28, 2009 at 12:11 pm

      Thank you, IHM. I am honored! :)

  11. Surbhi said, on June 28, 2009 at 3:54 am

    Awww…

  12. [...] Still tentative. Last time she was gone, I missed her so bloody much that I wrote my first and only poem! Not sure how I am going to get around this time. But I have a couple of weeks to prepare myself. [...]


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